I changed Centar’s dream after I read Carl Sagan’s “Demon Haunted World” and realized that I had similar dreams about my father. I had been wanting to rewrite that dream for years and now I have done it. I was going to have him dream about Sloan’s death to show he still had issues with it. Now the challange will be to work this dream and the ramifications of dealing with Sloan’s death into the rest of the story. There are a number of other points I need to make or clarify in the story before I can say I’m finished with it. In re-reading Chapter 1, I could find nothing more to add.