Forgot The Pizza

In the first pass at chapter 1, I completely forgot to add that Glenn had ordered a pizza and had been guzzling Mtn Dew and chips with the wrappers and empty cans strewn about.  It is not hard to imagine that the probably cause of death might be heart failure.  Glenn should smell the pizza as he turns down his row.  I also need to fill in some details about Joshua’s parents – why did he see them dead?  Maybe mention which band or song he is listening too.  Also need to come up with a name for the software company where he works.  It’s sufficiently large and I figure they make some kind of hardware in addition to the software.  Printers would be too similar to HP, so I thought about PC cash registers.

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